http://www.abcnews.go.com/Primetime/story?id=1596778
Yes it s true and horrible but is the truth. In this article there is a great deal of emotion. The writer shows the pure fear and loathing both girls, on how they forced to degrade them selves to stay alive. I have know about this true but terrible subject for a while now, but never had a read an article with such emotion such as this. I actually have but of younger girls who were just 5 yrs.l when they were taken. This girls around my age, had lost all their childhood Innocent in a blink of a eye. The author of this, was so determined to show how he felt, by this subject that, he placed his own human emotion,into his writing.
What made this article amazing. Well it is because the author put a pinch of his emotion, and a cup of the girl's emotions, mixed it together and made a "Delicious cake". This article you can vividly picture how those girls live and what they went through, you feel the fear as if it was a small spider crawling up your arm.. You want to read more on this subject also, since you can feel the emotion of the Victim's mentioned, you wonder how many more will go through this. Thus throwig out that lovely little lure you wanna take a bite at.
Wednesday, June 3, 2009
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You have captured the intensity of the emotions felt by the author as s/he is informing us about these horrific situations.
ReplyDeleteSome more concrete examples with quotations would actually give the reader an idea of which strategies the writer has used to engage the reader.
Also talk about word-choice, tone and fictional elements, like dialogue and characterization.
This is truly sad. Real men don't rape and I feel so bad for the girls that ever have to go through these experiences. Good job choosing the article, as topics like these tend to bring out emotions and raw anger.
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